Reviews for Not for Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok after, like, an hour I'm finally done reading your story! Yay, you gotta update soon ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you had the interlude.. It was interesting seeing the whole thing was from Dave's point of view... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God, this story is addicting, I gotta read the rest.. Oh, for a title, maybe it can be something like "Not Exactly a Storybook"... lol if I think of anything good, I'll let ya know. |
![]() ![]() Hehe, I didn't find that long at all... all I found was that I wanted to rea more, more, MORE! *coughs* Right... wonderful job! I love this tory so much! *hugs it* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, this sounds really good so far... Great start to the story ;) Hehe, I'm definitely reading the rest... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like. i like. keep going girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY...great 8 chapters...bit confusing cuz me not used to this being an "assignment" and then the interludes to capture Dav'es side... -.-; but i love it all the same, plz keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ loved it - cant wait for more keep up the fantastic work.. -Kate |
![]() ![]() It was a long chapter but it was not boring. I really really liked it! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! Please add the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol poor lexia even her thoughts are calling her 'dumbass'. no luck at all. dave's in her class. lol sandra isn't too bright. lol. ack she has NO luck at all. i like the interludes with dave's part cuz it helps get his side of the story. lol good question...how could you be amused & pissed at the same time? lol laughing & having people look it u is always funny. inner voices are always funny and make you think you're going insane. clarissa sounded freaky. lol couldn't recognize his own sister's voice! loved it! |
![]() ![]() o the juicy fruit jungle is so fun 2 sing tho! not in front of hot guys but like in the shower or while you are doing hmwk...yeah ok so good chapter. whyz he mad at her though? im confused. if ya could answer that for me thatd be nice... i apparently missed something |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! God please update sooner! By the way do you already have an idea as to why dave should be mad at lexia? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the very long chapter. Very well written :) *waits patiently for update* |
![]() ![]() ![]() denier dave is so cute!Lexia's a little awkward but i suppose that's the plan isn't it?i like her the way she is!i've had enough stories where the nerd gets turned into the pretty popular chick so keep lexia geeky!& pls update soon!u're up on my favs! |