Reviews for Not for Me
really-bad-egg chapter 8 . 8/19/2004
you updated! WOt! I luv this story, hate Dave, lol. Well so far because he makes you just want to strangle him, hes so conceited! I didnt find this chapter boring at all, I enjoyed it alot. Anywhoo I could ramble on forever, but im going to post chapter 5 of my story tootles!
loveonapostcard chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
I loved the chapter! Dave sounds so nice underneath his ego, lol. (_) Update soon!
lamentation chapter 8 . 8/19/2004
Yay, great chapter! It's nice and long D. I love this story, especially how you set it up and such. Hope you update soon!
awaiting impatient person chapter 8 . 8/19/2004
Yay! You updated! I like long chapters! Heheh. I feel hyper! And I have this sugar craving. X D Lol. Update soon, pretty pretty purdy please!
Bomb in the Garden chapter 8 . 8/19/2004
Man, I love this story so much...I love the way you're setting it out in Lexia writing an English paper and then having the interlude's with Dave's thoughts...very creative!
I love both characters because they each bring something unique to the story...Lexia's smart and a little quirky and although she says she doesn't care what people think about her, I think secretly she does, even though she doesn't realise it (that's just my interpretation) and Dave is very open about his arrogance and need for power within the school and within his relationship with Lexia.
My favourite line so far is the bit where the two girl's are having a fight over who gets to 'welcome' Dave to the school - you wrote: "They hug. The end. Applause." I thought that was hilarious! Very simple line but funny nonetheless.
Okay, I think I've written too much now so I'll go - please, please update as soon as possible - I think this story is going to be an awesome piece of writing and cannot wait to see how it unfolds!
Soumyanee chapter 8 . 8/19/2004
Hey I've been reading this story ever since you started, however being the stingy person I am, I didn't review. Sorry. Well just wanted to say, good job, few typos' but nothing major. just wondering by any chance will Lexia become popular?
Keep wriing.
Midnight Owl chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
hmm- i'm intrigued. i have to say that this reminds me of lyrics to a particularly fabulous bright eyes song "you write such pretty words, but life's no story book" hmm.. i'll read on but i'm sleepy so i don't promise that i'll be able to finish.
CrystalXBlade chapter 7 . 8/16/2004
Great chapter. Hope you update soon.
naraolla chapter 7 . 8/13/2004
wah... this is great! soo nice and so unlike my writings! i luv it! i really wonder now what will happen to lexia... with her change of clothes and all... so, update soon!
SLigHtLy FrEaKisH chapter 7 . 8/13/2004
Haha, fun-nay! Lol, this story is so funky! That Natalie chick seemed pretty cool, I like her. Keep up the fab work! And update SOON!
NomadicWriter chapter 7 . 8/13/2004
O_O you cant do this to me, I love your story, i cant wait to find out what happens next.. need more information lol - hope you post the next chapter soon, and i cant wait till Dave see's her. and i tell you whats really funny. one of my best friends is named Natalie White.. first you have me with the twins and now my friends names. lol.
you should make Natalie take her shopping or something and get her new clothes lol _ post soon.
proverbial bane chapter 7 . 8/13/2004
WoW. this was a cute chappie. i love your story.. too bad im crying and wanting something to kill time wit.. au... i'ma sleep now. bye bye... update this baby soon!
vociferous chapter 7 . 8/12/2004
it's a meaningful story...butthe plot so far doesn't really coincide with your summary...
psychedelic mishap chapter 7 . 8/11/2004
great chapter!
tho there wasn't much of dave...(
there better be some of him in the next chapter..cant wait for it!
update soon!
decree of fate chapter 7 . 8/10/2004
Yeah, I want a silver corvette...but I got a silver Elantra instead. Oh wells. Omg..she said that outloud! poor poor lexia. argh and the spaghetti. oh wow, natalie seemed nice. and i say again poor lexia. loved it!
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