This is awaiting impatient person, just so you know. I finally pulled myself off the couch and got myself a pen name. I just don't know how to create a story... Lol. I don't have Microsoft Word. I have Microsoft Processor.
Yay! I like this chapter a lot. Um.. I say that a lot don't I? .:shrugs:. I read the chapter that you added to Eternal War, but right now I can't review it for some reason. Stupid computer. ...I didn't mean it, though. Of course. How in the world (or beyond) could she not know who Paris Hilton is? I like Natalie; she's really nice. Unlike Stone Crest, my school's cheerleaders are bitchy or fake nice. .:rolls eyes:. Just because there's a stereotype for cheerleaders, it does not mean that they have to follow it. Lexia as pretty twisted thoughts, dude. Yay! A fight! .:grins manically:.
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Review for Chapter 13 of Eternal War
I wanted to review right now, so I'm just going to have two parts to the review. Lol. Yeah, I know I'm weird. I liked that chapter. Aren't you surprised that I said that? Darrin must have some special power just like Dave. But except of embarrassing Tania he stalks her. Creepy. Caelan is really nice like Natalie. Except that Caelan is a cool, weapon-making (don't look at me like that I don't know any synonyms for this-word?) fairy and Natalie is a cool, powerful yet surprisingly nice cheerleader. I think that Tania should come visit Caelan and learn to use the glefe. Did I spell that right? .:shrugs:. Well you mentioned your other story so I decided to read it and that's why I'm reading your stories from both sites. You're on my favorite authors list. ] When are you going to update Cruising Through? It's been a while since you've updated it. So... update soon, pretty pretty purdy please! (On all your stories of course.)
P.S. About a new title for Eternal War. Um... .:shrugs:. Sorry. I couldn't come up with anything. I'm very uncreative. .:rolls eyes:. My worst trait.

Weirdly enough, After i finished reading this I giggled. Let me remind you I'm not a giggly type of girl and never in my life have a giggle, so you must be doing something right here ;) heh I love the chapter! It's very well written and smartly funny (unlike all those other fics where the humor is so... dumb lol). Great job! :)

I like this fanfic. You should put a fight in it. Lol. Um.. You're probably looking at me weird right now. I'm different and weird and rude... .:bites lip:. It's not my fault. Sometimes I get crabby when I'm sleepy so I get all rude. But I don't think I'm as different and weird and rude as Lexia is. Heheh. Keep going. I like it a lot. update soon, pretty pretty purdy please! Along with your other fanfics, might I add.

lol, it's a fun game for dave but not lexia. his thoughts were funny too...how he kept convincing himself he wasn't interested in lexia like that. I want a silver corvette :( lol. he really likes seeing her blush. i liked it!

Heheh. I liked this chapter... Lol. That pie thing was highly amusing. ]

That chapter got me depressed, dude. Are people really allowed to curse in assignments like that? o_0

I love this story, it's funny, but not a comedy (i hate comedies, tv or books, they just don't make me laugh) please update, gives me something to read... need to buy more books but broke, so i read this... yeah, just had a nice ramble, see you later;)

this is really funny! and lexia's name is so cool. she's a really complex character, too. i like her!
thanks for reviewing my story, hope you read my other one "between romance & comedy" it's just 4 chapters anyway and it's already finished.
anyway,i'll wait for your update!

"hot car" is hilarious. :))
moving on to the next chapter...

gah! omg u have to update! I can tell he likes her even though his ego is too big to let him realize that. This one intrigued me its different (take this as a compliment cause im tired of cliches).Anyways keep up the good work and... UPDATE!

this story is awesome and and all but i dont find it very beleivable that she can swear in her assignment, or is it just my teachers who are prudes? Anyways still luvin it (damn you mc donalds)

i love her! (hehe thats all i have to say for now _)

well im telling you what i think as per your request, i thought the intro was great, i love that the character can be so honest (or rather that you made her honest). I'm sorry but i suck at "well rounded critiques" so all i can say is... on to the next chappie!

Hey.
Wow I was menitoned in the little author's note thingy, albiet becuase of my stupidity, and inability to read the first line of your bio, but still I was mentioned none the less. Yay me. I think. Anyway, on to the review, that is why I am here after all. I was totally exstatic to see that you had updated. I honestly think this is one of my favorite favorite stories on the site. I have quite a few, but this one rocks my socks -holds up socks so that you can see them rock- Yeah. Um.. I really like your continued interlude, it's a unique way of getting in more information about Dave and his Pov without having a flashback or italic thoughts, and makes it so you aren't simply repeating a scene but adding to it. He seems hot, but he does have quite a bit of a large ego doesn't he. But sometimes that is attractive, or so infuriating that it makes someone seem like they are attracted to that other person. Ok so that made a lot more sense in my head. Most stuff does though. Anyway. It's cool that Shane and Dave are friends, that should make things interesting for Lexia. Which is a totally cool name by the way since most girls are called Alex or Lexi, so Lexia is unique. Oh and Dave talking to himself at the end, that was hilarious! He so likes her! Listen to those inner voices! Ok, too many exclamation points. Hehe. Can't wait for the "he got pissed off" moment. Update as soon as you can.
Natalie

I absolutely love this story. I've been on the hunt for a a story with a charatcer that sort of resembles me. Alexia is a lot like me... but we're different too. I'm not so shy and a bit more outgoing. Dave sounds like a real sweatheart... once you get past that ego. The bit about the lost puppy made me want to laugh and cry at the same time!