Reviews for Not for Me
cutie20 chapter 5 . 7/25/2004
I found the story! it's good, update! you ella enchanted ones also!
Little Precious chapter 5 . 7/24/2004
Oh no! Poor Lexia! Her ranting is something I would definitely do. I like how there's the whole 'stream-of-consciousness' thing in this story ) and I must admit I was surprised Dave thinks she's a loser *sob* hehe.
Do update soon. I look forward to reading more of this )
If you have time, please check out my story 'destiny or luck?' - i'd love to hear what you think about it ) Ta!
Amber Hill chapter 5 . 7/23/2004
woah.. i love this story.. it's really great and entertaining (have i said this before?).. very original as well. it wasn't until i read the interlude that i realised Dave was just playing with her... hey.. what an *ss man... :( i hope he learns his lesson later!
okay okay i can't really help with the "two things".. i know next to nuts about cars and i don't think you've heard of Asian car brands. so... yeah. er about the pissed of part though... i guess you could write about how she makes a fool of Dave in class by showing the class how stupid/ignorant he is.. i know she's shy and probably doesn't speak up in class.. but you could say the teacher made her correct him... something like that.. when he was acting like a big know-it-all unless of course, you want Dave to be a smart guy...
Or maybe you could make Dave like, fall in love with her a little, and she turns him down in front of all the popular kids and he loses face or something like that..
i know my ideas aren't that good :P but i tried! haha.. yup keep this going and i'll sQueEze time in my horrible schedule to read every single chapter! :)
decree of fate chapter 5 . 7/23/2004
is ethan shane? i loved the interlude was nice to see dave's spin on things. lexia is too funny. um, maybe she could ruin a date for him somehow...or something, i don't know. lol. i loved it though!
Sharap'n chapter 5 . 7/22/2004
great chapter... hm... i duno wot Lexia could do. I guess I'm just uncreative :(
PhiloNysh chapter 5 . 7/22/2004
Ah, well the pissed off-ness is kind of coming out. It's like he's justa annoyed at her because she is who she is, right? Update soon, this is going well
Airirea chapter 5 . 7/22/2004
that was a really good story. I enjoy reading it. The sentences are very interesting. Is the story going to have a sad ending? I mean the way it was written so far.. well... I guess I'll have to wait.
Keep up the good work.
Nickety chapter 4 . 7/20/2004
I have been late in expressing my love for the quirky goodness of this fic. So I shall do it now.

The topic ain't original (what is these days? Not much), but the point of view and protagonist (that's spelled wrong, or maybe it's not) is absolute beautimousness. Loved the pie situation. Oh, pies.

Quite the cliffhanger you got there. Do update when you can, si? Whee.

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decree of fate chapter 4 . 7/19/2004
lol...lexia is funny! i love this. when she squeaked and ran away i laughed! lol, my neighbor likes to play b-ball at like midnight and three in the morning and all I hear is bounce, bounce, swish, bounce, bounce, bang (ball missed). aw, poor lexia. her plan backfired...eek i would have turned EXTREMELY red, worse than a stop sign.
fouetbea143 chapter 4 . 7/19/2004
Your story is fantastic! I thought the translations were funny _. I would be MORTIFIED _ if I was Lexia and in teddy bear pajamas..infront of a hot guy. I'm a little confused, so I have a question. Is this story supposed to be Lexia's assignment for english class? I mean, is this supposed to be some kind of journal she's supposed to show to Mrs. Anderson? I must sound like a total ditz right now, but I'm just confused. Anyways, GREAT story!
WildGoddess chapter 4 . 7/19/2004
Omg incredible story! I was laughing so hard at the translations. You're characters are truly amazing. Update soon!
Adders721 chapter 4 . 7/19/2004
I like your story and how you have the interactions between lexia and the guy! Please update soon!
JandJ chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
quite interesting, keep up the good work.
PhiloNysh chapter 4 . 7/19/2004
*claps* I love this, it's really good! The chnaging name thing was a bit odd, but i'll get used to it. All I can say now, is you'd better update soon, coz this story is wicked!
Amber Hill chapter 4 . 7/19/2004
haha.. love this story.. it's great! very funny and entertaining. keep it up!
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