Reviews for My Eternal Water
this needs more feeling chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Love the idea behind this, well constructed and put together piece.
Well Done
Keep Writing!
CelestialTwilight chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
I like this one. You know what it kinda reminds me of? The Ring. *grin* Keep writing so I can keep reading.
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
very creepy poem..and very vivid. i could almost imagine myself being in that well. hey! maybe you should write a story about this experience; it would make an excellent one. thanks for sharing and keep writing!