Reviews for My Disturbance
Deavon Brooks chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
i don't know what to say in this review except that this is the most beautifully disturbing poem i have ever read. very descriptive, portrays clear image of what is happening in the poem.
misti chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
I love this one! i think i posted another review about this one, but i don't know if it got put up or not. another one of my favorites. i have too many.
Whoo! Rock On!
Terpsichore13 chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Um, this is very um, freaky. How can you think these thoughts Durelen? Anyways, no I'm not paying much attention now, and yes, I will read your other poems, however scarey and sucicidal they may seem. You're on my favorite authors list by the way! (Don't ask me why)
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
A very good angst poem...
*ponders about the blood, the self-hate...*
Well rather graphic, but sometimes you have to be don't you, to get things across. Very vivid imagery created (i've said that twice). The last two lines really intensified the theme. Great stuff
Infinit1 chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
This is god. Very vivid. I can almost feel the pain and rejestion.
Bravo...Auncor...carry on.
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