|Reviews for Pins|
| Blue Abyss chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
I like your stuff.
| slain-angel chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
I love it. It's short, but it says so much. The only thing I would have done different is change the second line a bit so that it doesn't say "Take the"... it's a little repetative without being a common theme to the piece... maybe something like "Loosen the strings" instead?
Anyhow, I really like it.