|Reviews for Razor, Razor|
| Laura chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
this is me, from dA.
I can kinda relate 2 this poem, i like it cos of the repetition.
| High Sorceress Zeia chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
o.o;; How morbid, Britt-chan. XD But I like it.
| Baka B.M chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
Beautiful poem, Nath
I like how the words are short and sharp, like the razor. The words are harsh and then followed by a softer tone and it just brings a lot of emotion to the piece. The repeative style is strong and it really makes you take notice of the words. Wondeful poem, Britt. The best I've seen.
| fiddler jones chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
| Eirien chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
These aren't really haikus, so maybe you should put it in a different category, but the poem itself is really good. Very effective with the repetitions, the short lines, the staccato-like rhythm and the rhymes. It's a good idea to address the razor directly, personifying it as a means of release the speaker appeals to. My favourite line is "You're my shout", this is so true, SH often being what I have called "silent cries" in my poetry on the subject.
| Mitsunaga chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
Not exactly a haiku...Not exactly my type of poetry...not exactly my type of suicide...seppuku the way to die honorably and to let you know you have a friend to end the pain by chopping your head off...bushidogood stuff
| Raven A. Star chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
oh my god...Please say you're not doing that. But that was an excellent poem.
| fanigoes2hollywood chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
I love it, the repetatism, the emotions used.i reely loved one for the favorites!
| Tala and Stephy chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
WANG! Anyways, it sort of creeps me out. Just the fact that someone would self-mutilate themselves. Overall, it was a good poem. Emotional, and creepy, yes, but still, it had a lot of talent in this poem. Good work, Britt. _