|Reviews for She|
| Sidra A Kollers chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Gorgeous poem, I love your style. It was very visual.
| DiffusedBlues chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
You are a mere memory here you areNo more than a ghost now you Moved on since seventeen A veteran poet who took to the world youNever came back but wondered who took to the sea of expression...
| Rainbow Fingers chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Another amazing piece. It was morbid and beatiful. Loved it, especially the 'Cracked lips, sandpaper tongue' I don't know why, but I really like the line. And of course the ending, which tied everything. Nicely done.
| aries-diva-JC chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
haunting... love d flow, how u would say 'she' and then say what she was on the next line... fantastic job...
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
amazing imagery and word choice. stunning poetry.
| SilverSpinner chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Oh wow...powerful...I really like it. "She is knife hipbones she is sharp ribs, sharper nails, animal inside her belly clawing at nothing..." I like how the lines seem mixed up but it all makes so much sense. Amazing work.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
;_; This was a beautiful poem.
| this is my love for you chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Wow... powerful stuff.
| Helxine chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
| Kitty-brdg chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
*claps* very good. I liked this mucho.
| AsianScaper chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
I love how you've put the poem together and how also, it is fragmented. As though the persona is pausing to think, realizing some truth after the space of each line, only to spout some words and stop again.
However, for all the negative and dark images, she holds seduction in her grasp and not matter how hollow her voice, can still speak with what is physical in her.
Well, as a reader, that's what I've read from the poem. And the bias is there, for I love images. Keep the wonderful writing up! It's always a warm feeling at the pit of my stomach to see good poetry about. Cheers!
| Etheral chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
O0o0o0o0o0o .. i like. Wonderful job!
| APersonAndAHalf chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
Woah...don't know how to review this other than saying this was beyond my capability to review...
| jack c. weller chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Honest with powerful metaphors.
| Nita chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Oh, I really like this one. The lack of punctuation is really effective - gives it a desperate, frenzied sort of feel that's kind of overwhelming. (But in a very good way.) 'she is Death with a made-up face' - I love that. Very striking, perfectly done. :)