Reviews for You're Not the Only One
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
i love your songs! so good man!
Charisma101 chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
I truly liked this song, i easily found a beat, which is awesome in my case, Anyway.. I have a little suggestion,
"He wishes he had a TV family
Wishes the beatings would stop
From his drunken dad"..i think you should of put it daddy so it matched with family, cause when i was reading/singing (lol)daddy was said, even though it wasn't there.. anyways, LOVE IT!
crybabekrizz chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
i thought this was quite an inspiring piece good job!
Berlin's Brown Eyes chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Gosh that's so true. Usually when people write angst it tends to have a messy conclusion like suicide or often no conclusion at all. This one, however, leaves room for hope. It's inspiring.
angelicGrace chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
it is an all too common reality that you write of. some times we all just need reminding.
MagzRL chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Very, very, very good. It does seem to soothe, but you also take the point that sometimes, knowing that there are others out there with dreadful problems like those, it might not be soothing to some. But, it's still great work. Well done!