Reviews for Enter Phear
Urthrun chapter 1 . 2/1/2001
Sorry if this is a bit harsh, but I've been writing since I was 3, and I've read a LOT, I MEAN A LOT. Good character, but the prose is a bit clumsy, and you have some bad spelling and sentence structure. Other that that, it's pretty chilling. Hope to see more of the character, maybe in a 1st-person sort of tale like this one.
Amberthistle chapter 1 . 1/30/2001
Good story, sent chills up my spine at points. You sure this guy isn't real?
JGuy chapter 1 . 1/13/2001
Wow. There's a fanfic you don't see every day (and I mean that in a good way). Man. I've seen some evil guys in my day, but I think Ed here takes the cake. In fact, after reading this, I have the urge to go over to a corner and shiver in fear. And Mr. Phear will like that, indeed.
King Boom chapter 1 . 1/6/2001
Nightmoon chapter 1 . 1/5/2001
Ooooh.. nice character. "Edward" definetely strikes 'Phear' into my heart... ;p
JDLawrence chapter 1 . 1/4/2001
wow! that was good! I hope to see more of your work! - Arwen