Reviews for Black
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
my-vision chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
great personification. the rhyming is great, and doesn't hinder your writing. (i struggle with that) you have a wonderful gift! keep it up!
April Hammer chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Poor black... :(
But this makes a good point. I never thought about that. Personification is fun, and I really like this! You get a THUMB! *thumbs up* Not two, because I need one thumb for the space bar...
dancingunderwaterfalls chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
and i like the color black...ha. i love your writing style. How you can take one word and write a hundred others about it. It's really good. truly.