Reviews for Better Than Fine
Funsmoke chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
I don't know why...it's terrible, but this made me break out laughing. Honestly, I know how it feels to try to "just be friends" but this is so wonderfuly and terribly true...I find it hilarious. Well written, as well, I like the adverb breaks between the longer lines.
Rachel Peterson chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
awesome! I added this to my favorite poems list! Keep it up! I especially love the ending ;)