Reviews for In War
arwen-evenstar89 chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
wow! Great job, yet again. And very thoughtful and true at the same time. And the rhyming rox too, it doesn't sound forced at all!
DuVille chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
this aint so bad... i actually like it. i agree here that war does change everything... personally, i don't like wars. but i like this poem. Ü
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Very moving... astounded by how lyrical this was... awesome job...
sc4sc chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I like it! Wasn't too sure about the ryhming rhythm at first, but as the poem progressed, it suited it very well. I think the line 'See our comrades die in vain' is a powerful line...
Alhana Starbreeze chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
hey kate
i still think this is cool
even if you don't think so
im sure other people will like it to
in my profile i put down your username
so you should get more reveiws, umm maybe
do you like my poems?
mine are the ones that are dumb ya know
well ttyl sheesh this is long