wow! Great job, yet again. And very thoughtful and true at the same time. And the rhyming rox too, it doesn't sound forced at all!
~Lauren

this aint so bad... i actually like it. i agree here that war does change everything... personally, i don't like wars. but i like this poem. Ü
-DV

Very moving... astounded by how lyrical this was... awesome job...

I like it! Wasn't too sure about the ryhming rhythm at first, but as the poem progressed, it suited it very well. I think the line 'See our comrades die in vain' is a powerful line...

hey kate
i still think this is cool
even if you don't think so
im sure other people will like it to
in my profile i put down your username
so you should get more reveiws, umm maybe
do you like my poems?
mine are the ones that are dumb ya know
well ttyl sheesh this is long