Reviews for The Bracelet
PleaseDeleteThisAccountMods chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
*sniff* wow. That was touching. It kind of reminded me of someone I know. This is very well done! lol keep ritin'
fantasize chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
hey! its kinda sad but its so sweet at the same time. i like that it the story gets told properly but is short and simple at the same time.
Cara Sterling chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
Awe, what a sweetie! Lol. I just want you to know that I am a HUGE Laurell K Hamilton fan, I have every single book on both series of Meredith and Anita... aren't they amazing? Lol. Anyways, that's so cute what that boy did, I take it that was a true story, since the biography says that it was something from childhood... anywho, cheers!

~*Jaden Anderson*~
fuckoff fictionpress wish to d chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
that was a really sweet story and very well written...i really loved it...Justin seems like such a sweet guy...i hope the two of you kept in touch
*smiles*
a perfect one-shot
MolestAPeanut chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Hm. It's sad, because I know what it's like to be teased by cruel kids. But I'm glad you found a friend. Alright. Yeah. Good. Buh Bai.
Pico the Great chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
Aw, man, I know what that's like. Kids can be real idiots sometimes; I've been in that hole. I liked that story to it, though. It's the kind of thing in fiction that people say, "no way, man, that's too sentimental," but sometimes it really does happen. If it doesn't, then you've just gotta stick it out and wait/hope for the best.
angel-Janna chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
aw. that was lovely!i awwed out loud when i read it, and as one outcast to another, i know the feeling.
Keep it up,
Janna
Clodhopper chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
thats really really sweet. i liked it a lot. first person seems to be a strong point for u, personal opinion of course. i enjoyed it a lot. the only thing i can think of to fix is that at the start a few words are repeated in the same chapter like "children" not a big deal, just something to think about when you're procrastinating and want something to help u delay whatever it is ur doing. as for the story, i agree, friends are so important. i wont bore u with my own personal stories of benifit from friendship but i think this is a topic a lot of people can identify with and thats cool. anyway good job again
~Mack
Gwargedd-Annwn13 chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
its so sweet! makes me want to hug someone *hugs* _ great story
Tarakatty chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
hey, I remember you telling me this story, and I think that it is so sweet. It makes me all teary at the end when you are talking about friends and how important they are, because it's true, we can only be alone for so long. The only thing that I would suggest is that you work on your sentence structure, so that everything flows more smoothly.
Chains of Melody chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Your experiences are somewhat similar to mine, except that they are more profound. Of course friends are important, they are the ones who will make you feel better in your darkest hours. So is exchanging gifts, a symbol of sweetness and friendship.
Great story!
Btw, could you review my stories too? :)
Alhana Starbreeze chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
It is so nice to know that there are others who are like me
You weren't the only one who was tormented
that was a great story!
dancin-leprechaun chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
That is so sweet! Is this story true? Do you still talk to him?
Your first piece of jewelery and your first friend are always the most important things to you. When i was younger i got a necklace for my fifth birthady off my brother - he had decorated my headboard with streamers - I really wish I'd kept it.
I'm glad you've still got it!
And you've definately got the talent of writing!