Reviews for Frost
twilightwriter07 chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
Nice job here along with the twist at the end.
Silver Nightingale chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
Aah... The wonders of double meanings... Nice job! Great haiku. :)
Moonlight Silver Wolf chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Kind of short. it is a good beginning to a poem. :)
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
The second and third line were very metamorphical... and that is awesome... very good...
softlycryingrain chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
another haiku! yay!
so true... frost is so pretty... but short lived
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
i wonder whether frost has a value at all, but anyway... it made me think. I liked the first two lines. A good poem using few lines!
kazena-chii chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
i like how u followd the rythem of the the format of a poem and still making it sound like u didn't add another word for the heck of making it fit. thats exactly wat a good poet can do. ur very creativ
keep writing:)
AnotherFace chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I like this. It's pretty (deep review, huh?) Sorry, Im bad at reviews! I really like this though! Great job!