This is getting interesting. I would say more, but I'm rather tired. Good job on it.

Another great chapter! . I like the person the just ran into whom ever that may be. Please continue!

Heh. Sounds very interesting. I would like to see what happens next.
You're doing a great job. Keep going

This is a nice piece of work, although some grammar problems were evident. Luckily they weren't enough to get in the way of the story. It's imaginitive so far, so good job!

Cool. I great chapter! humm...there's really nothing to say except for that. The development of the characters is starting to show. I'd like to see more depth in Adam, but how Amy recieved the necklace is wonderful. I can't wait to see what you post next.

Oh wow, this has caught my attention! The depth and background information you give is excellent. Very, very good, though...I do wish you hadn't left it as a cliffie . Other than that, .~ excellent! If you want, could you review mine, you don't have to, though. *adds story to favs.*

It's good but now I want to find out what is next Keep going

Wow! That was amazing! im glad that i gound it! update soon, i know you just posted it today, but wow! its really good!

The summary didn't make the story sound that interesting, but I'm glad I read it now because it's a very good story. Good work. I'm going to continue reading this.
If you have time, could you review my story "Of Men And Magi"? I would be thankful if you did, but if not that's okay too.

I'm kind of confused. Is this meant to not co-ordinate with the real world? (e.g. Venus being created after creatures)