Reviews for Imperfect
vionny-san chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
whe...heya, yingxi
i loved this poem cos it was very eerie and dark and very sad in a nice sorta way. keep on updating !
lovin you
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
heya xixi!
i like this too!
short sentences,
but sweet!
and nice and dark and eerie too.
*throws confetti around*
sine chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
hey- brilliant imagery here! a bit macabre, but not too much. I cannot stop thinking about the imagery. GREAT IMAGERY!
*kisses zkenshinx*
A M A chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
I like this poem. Its dark and gloomy and sad but speaks of freedom and peace and release.
As you said, "Mist surrounds the future". Does this mean you're unsure of your own future? Don't worry, you're still young.
Keep up the good work