Reviews for Faking It
Suicidal Butterfly chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
This poem seems to come across very strong especialy the ending. Perhaps your speaking about someone specific?
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Thanks so much for reviewing! I love my ED poems, if you want to read my recent ones they are here
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Infinit1 chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
I liked every thing...*confused stare*..
except for the end. The wording was really good and I liked the way you managed to make it rhym, but, if that's what you were going for throughout the entire thing then the ending should have rhymed also. Just my opinion. Other that that, great poem.