Always return to the scene of the crime. Or, in this case, the scene of the miracle. I liked this short story :)

*Bella*

~Kia Kha~

glad he made his decision. I automatically don't like Devan- typical bully. :s Good portraying of character.

*bella*

~Kia Kha~

Another good chapter :) Some of the formatting is off, but your writing flows really well. Keep it up,

*Bella*

Poor Michael. :( A friend of mine Kalyra Shadowdancer told me you also existed in the fictionpress world so I decided to check out your writing. Nice chapter,

*Bella*

~Kia Kha~

Oh my goodness! As soon as I started reading I was completely enthralled! I think you did a wonderful job!

Wow! Cool! It's awesome that Jason made his descision! And now he's going back to the orphanage? Cool!

Yay! Michael/Jason, has someone to love him! It's really good so far, and I can't wait to see what will come up next! :)

I really like it so far! It's short, but thats okay! I can't wait to see what Chapter 2 is like. :)