Reviews for A Boy, A Girl, And A Father
Shuyan chapter 15 . 3/6/2005
Great job with the story. Its very well detailed and well thought out. You shoulda made 16th chapter. *Cries* If you have a chance can you check out my story Sword of the rightful hand
kindaquirky chapter 13 . 12/12/2004
Wow! what a great story! I love the plot! Ricky & Maria totally like each other! Keep it up girl! :)
Aphrodides chapter 12 . 12/2/2004
Thank you for updating woman! That boy better have plans to save her. This was a good chapter. Update soon!
Aphrodides chapter 11 . 10/27/2004
This chapter was good, the dream didn't "suck" it was good. Start updating sooner or your grounded!
Aphrodides chapter 10 . 10/4/2004
Good Woman! Update soon!
Marisa Rae chapter 8 . 8/23/2004
Absolutely wonderful! I did notice one typo, but that doesn't really matter, you're bound to have a few! :) Sorry you lost that paper! Glad you found it though! ;) Keep up the good work, and you're not the only one who hasn't updated in a while! *self-conscious smile* Well, see you in chapter eight! :)
~~Risa~~
Marisa Rae chapter 7 . 8/9/2004
Ahh! What is going on? I'm just dieing to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
Marisa Rae chapter 6 . 8/1/2004
Well, I'm finally back! Anyway, great chapter! I'm in a lot of suspense here! UPDATE SOON!
Marisa Rae chapter 5 . 7/24/2004
Wow! I really like this chapter! Now I'm in horrible suspense! Update soon!
Brown Eyed Queen
Marisa Rae chapter 4 . 7/24/2004
Oh, wow! This sounds pretty exiting! Keep it up! You’re on my AA
Aphrodides chapter 4 . 7/22/2004
It's starting good. Maybe the chapters could be a little longer? Update soon.
kaika switched chapter 3 . 7/18/2004
Yeah, short chapters they are. I like Maria, though. She's an interesting character. So now, who was that boy? You'd better update soon with some answers! Keep writing!
Ml4eva2009 chapter 2 . 7/17/2004
am totally liking this story! update soon! -Ml4eva2009