Reviews for You asked What was Wrong
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
I liek it... I can definately relate.. good job!
christelle chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
That poem was great, it was also brutally honest but that was great too. Just always remember humans are evil evil vile creatures. Lets convert to alienism.
Charlie chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
Drama, drama, drama. That's all its been this year. The emotion behind this is lovely, but u obviously don't feel that way. When will our group realize that we havent trusted eachother for a long time already? Our group is so dependent on what the rest thinks (even if they don't realize or admit it). If people are crumbling ur cookie and ur miserable in this company, why do u keep it? It's not even really the company, cuz any group of ppl will have it's own problems. Be urself if that's what u want. No one can keep u from doing that. Being happy depends on perspective. So make a choice ur happy with. Good writing
Shaughna chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
I love it! I get it and i'm sorry...I wish people didn't make us feel this way! Neways good work and nice one!