|Reviews for Chase Me if I Run|
| 123456789gone chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
This does extrememly well as both a poem and a song. It doesn't fall into the age old trap of trying to say too much (the downfall of most songs), but still puts across a simple but powerful message with great skill.
The rhymes work well, something you should take due credit for. You could possibly do with some punctuation in there to aid the reader, but then again I always say that.
This really is good stuff. Keep it up.
| shea's surrender chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
I love it, really sweet and sad! wish i knew the tune you made it up to...