|Reviews for Reawakening|
| fettered outcast chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
awesome poem...when summer comes i always feel like it will last forever but when its the last two weeks of august and i come back from my dads house im like oh dammit did i get everything for skool...but yeah i reely liked this poem...it made me feel those last two weeks and when a poet can make you feel something you just know he or she rocks!
| Jonathon J. O'Brien chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
This is something that everyone can relate to, you have a great talent, i'm glad to see that someone out there uses their gift.
| myno chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
very well written, your word choice and format portrays the emotion well. I can relate, and imagine that most people can.
| Irked Materia chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
I don't know what your inspiration for this poem was, but somehow it reminded me of finishing a good book. Good job.
| b-U-b-TRUE chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
This is good. I love "And pens ran out of blood". I just got confused at the end "And they will continue to Also till eternity". keep writing.
| xxDarkEnchantressxx chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
I do like it a lot; but this line could be fixed:
That was a sudden stop
Don't write hey in your poem. You could just say
But that was a sudden stop.
Other than that- very good!
| battousai24 chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
It's good. I like it. Thanks for reviewing my poem. PLease review some of my works as well. Thanks.