Reviews for My Belonging Place
Karma Fish chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
I love the language you use. "Scream./ Sorry, were you saying something? Yes, I was screaming" really stood out for some reason (in a good way, I mean).
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Nice poem, preferred "Burn" though, it was more touching, but this poem is written better.
invalid id chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
You can just write. You are a writer, good job indeed. Kinda not as good as Burn cause I loved all the emotional rage but this is good in a sort of quiet manner. I like it, but I like Burn more.
PS: Wow so many times my name is seen on your profile. Thanks : ) You made my day. And thanks for the one about liking my stuff...that means a lot. BTW, since ya like my stuff, I've got some newer stuff I've put up this month, check it out if you don't mind. Peace out Fiontari (I always wanna say Ferrari lols)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
very nice poem
shea's surrender chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
I love this one too, but I have to say I liked "burn" better just because of all the raw emotion. However, going for language and poetic-ness, this one is awesome!