I love the language you use. "Scream./ Sorry, were you saying something? Yes, I was screaming" really stood out for some reason (in a good way, I mean).

Nice poem, preferred "Burn" though, it was more touching, but this poem is written better.

You can just write. You are a writer, good job indeed. Kinda not as good as Burn cause I loved all the emotional rage but this is good in a sort of quiet manner. I like it, but I like Burn more.
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very nice poem

I love this one too, but I have to say I liked "burn" better just because of all the raw emotion. However, going for language and poetic-ness, this one is awesome!