I know how you feel! Sometimes people can just creep me out. Hey, thanks for reviewing my poem... I am just starting out as well! My muse is so shy its scary, so I know what you mean 'bout the "go easy on me" thing. But lucky for you we wont be needing to go easy on you cause this is a great peice of work! I like your friends phone number! I'll have to use that sometime...er.. that is ...if you will let me.. Its nice to have someone else who is just begining. Thx

you go girl (or guy, but i'm guessing this is a girl's page)! Long distance relationships are really pathetic and they really don't get anywhere. well, some do, but those people can be real desperate.
Anyway, i like the last two lines in your poem although I kinda feel that this is like a rant. But that's okay, poems express emotions and it can turn out to be a rant at times. I rant a lot... Anywho, I liked the poem because it's true.