Reviews for Untitled
acid-tears chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
wow, thats a lot of hate. nice poem though, some good rhyming )
Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
"I want to make you feel deprived" that is by far the best line I've heard in awhile. Great poem, very violent.
BlackLilyArcher chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
that is the best poem ever.
Lan Jian chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
wow... so much angst... it's so descriptive, keep up the good work!