|Reviews for Feelings|
| zhi chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
great job! Perfect punctuation and all that, I tend to disregard all that stuff meself so it's nice to see someone who actually IS grammatically correct :-P
The rhythm is good and the whole poem really grabs you. You have a lot of potential, keep up with the writing!Just returning the favor,-Z-
| darkdreamerx chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
Oh my God another great poem! I think you should enter ...I think that's what it's called...and submit this! D Keep it up!
| Moarte in Extaz chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
This is really prety... I was surprised that you didn't have reviews. I liked this... Keep writing and never stop.
~:~ Melena ~:~