Reviews for Fictitious Tomorrow
Charisma101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Whoa! you got a lot better since the last time I reviewed, nice job!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
i like this. very, very, very, relatable adn well done *claps!*
tragicallynormal chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
I loved how you captured the promise of tomorrow being a better day, yet it never comes. This is really deep, and I totally understand it. Great job!
Breaking Heart chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
YES!this is totally awesome and i love it!
your irish lover
MagzRL chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
Oh lord! Annie's just popped into my head, and she's singing her "Tomorrow" Song! Well, this is a very good piece. I like the observations, title, and clearly the chorus. Thanks for the observation and reviews!
Magz.
angelicGrace chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
i like the premiss of this. that need to get past all the sh*t and on to the better days.
Cinnamon Zo chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
Great! It really conveys the anger at things getting so hard that all teens face! I can totally relate! It really would make a great song... Keep writing!
Kibby chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
Wow, morbid. But good, nontheless. Keep writing!