Reviews for ExPerfectionist Allure
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
lovely dark and brilliant. i loved the little bits in parenthises, they really enhanced the mood of this poem. this was awesome.
fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
oh! Thats pretty good!
Seeing Starz chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Hm, I like the set off part but the repetition in it didn't really catch on with me, I don't know. The rest of the poem was very descriptive and you really set the mood for this poem.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
strong and the structure is great!
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
Wow, that was good. You really know how to create a delicate atmosphere in your poem. I like your writing style; it's very unique. Mine tends to be pretty straightforward, so kudos to you for being original. b_d
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
wow... very nicely done... very creepy feel.. I like the stuff in parenthesis... thanks so much for your reviews!
karmakaze chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Wow, I'm impressed! I really like the title, also.
Also the end. That's how it is trying not to be a perfectionist. Great work:-)
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Ohh, I like. Another wonderful poem. It's so powerful..! And I love the way you put parts in parentheses (sp?), it really adds to the poem. Great job!
bach-player chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
liked this...nice and dark...my kind of thing!