Reviews for The Last Dance
byellarose chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
you have a great first chapter going...a little vague but intriguing none the less...i can't help you with the dance movements, although maybe you could describe how a character feels while kind of describing what they're doing with their body motions? i may be a dancer...but i dont think i could help you with what you're asking. i have one remark though...try to start a new paragraph when a different character starts to speak...it could be a little easier on the eyes...that is just my opinion though and i think you have a great story started here..._
Playground Love chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
It sounds interesting, write another chapter
hesfb chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
i like it... do you really need to know dance movements? cuz im reading a stroy called made to dance together and its great and it doesnt mention anyof the dance moves... just alludes to them :) anyway hope you continue! :)
MagenDavid chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Two words:
WRITE MORE.
on second thought- three words:
WRITE MORE NOW!