Reviews for Who I Really Am
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
THIS IS IT! this is the poem ive been waiting for! in case you havent figured it out the reason i read your older work 1st is so that i can see how youre style has developed... how youve poem means alot since i now know that youve depended on your friends so much in youre life (at least the parts youve written about ) and now you feel strong enough to fend for yourself. Very well written Lovely spactacular !
Nat
Tom Madden chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
that was REALLY good. keep up the awesome work!
Sara chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
Hey Erin, this is great! I LOVE it!
My favorite lines:
The feathers catching the sun, reflecting it back,; My voice returns to me again unheard
I really love the imagry there. Good job! :)
darkpaladin13 chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
Nice job, really good writing again. I have no doubts you can make it on your own.
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Nice poem, it seems to have quite a strong, hidden message.
mourningangel chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
I like that. You write with passion, and that's cool because i know some people that don't. I really like your writings.
sheasrebellion chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
I like it! enjoyable, happier sounding than many of the other poems that I've read here, it sounds so hopeful!
Please write more!
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Beautiful poem. I love the words and emotions in this poem. Wonderful work!
Echo Despise chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
wonderful, just wonderful. youre strong, you can make it on your own, no question bout it.
Echo Despise chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
wonderful, just wonderful. youre strong, you can make it on your own, no question bout it.