|Reviews for Naïveté|
| Kiran S chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
thas a great poem. u got great vocabulary and an amazing talent of putting words together and making it sound so unique! great job. and thanks for the reveiw of "a waste of breath"
| Lauren Raven chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Very good...I especially like the contrast between the beginning and ending of the poem. Excellently done; keep writing, and thanks for the review of 'So Precious Little Time.' I'm glad you liked it )
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
wow, beautiful poem. i loved the wording. it flowed well, which is hard to do with this scattered rhyming. i loved it.
| Vani WolfTurtle chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Wow, I really liked this. The meter and such were just great. I also like the rhyme scheme, how sometimes you had just a "vowel" sound rhyme (where the ending consonants aren't quite the same. . . do I even know whatI'm talking about?) I think this is one of the best poems I've ever read. Do you read poetry a lot, or something?