Reviews for Suffocation
Traced In Green chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
So sad, but so beautiful and full of emotion. Loved it, it's down to earth so anybody can relate to it. Keep writing. And btw this is Young'n'HopelessKid.
-with my nothing-
JP
shea's surrender chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
wow...kinda scary, but great poem!
Yaquel Visain chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Suffocating, dying... it's all basically the same with the hatred and the yeah. There's nothing special about this poem.