Reviews for the light at the end of the tunnel
Jeff Blouin chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
Straight Foreward,
its a good poem but a point would be to go on with the idea. You dont have to be hitting the nail on the head. Example: go on about the light at the end of the tunnel. explain it in great detail. How it makes you feel, what you think it may look like, so on and such forth.
twilightwriter07 chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
I like the last line adds a hint of mystery to the ever elusive goal that we're trying to accomplish. Nice job! _