Reviews for Little children
DstroyedurDreams chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
everyone likes to be protected by others. or at least believe that they are. but no angel however powerful can protect us from everything. we must be able to stand on our own. or we will not last long.
Jeff Blouin chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
This one could be even better. I get your idea but once again, its short. I get that the children are playing and are protected, but you need to go on give more information give your feelings about this. Tell how the snake views this, how the angel looked apon the snake, and the children.