Reviews for Just Random
Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
its nonsensical, and your tenses are off, but the pretense is good :-p

i like the idea behind it, and its fairly original. Nice work.
empty account chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
I like this poem. It is very true and to the point. As another reviewer suggested, it could be lengthened but the current length works very well. It's a short poem that makes the reader think. Great job!
Jeff Blouin chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
Good idea to work with but just doesnt give me anough. I feel a need to want more, feel more but am not getting it. Go on with the random idea. Just dont stop, I can sence it but just can't grasp it.