|Reviews for Kite Story|
| Kaewi chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Now this is a really moving poem. I hope that it helped you to move on, as well.
| Dezires chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
Thank you for reviewing my poetry.
This poem gave me chills throughout my body. GREAT WORK OF ART. I'm going to read more :)
| tablesalt chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Beautiful. It is amazing how you can weave simple words into such poignant sentences. I am not very fond of rhyming poems, but this one just flowed perfectly from line to line.
| Grey Mitten chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
i love this, it's so sad, the idea of a boy flying a kite to reach his dead mother..
yep, this is a favorites.
| tabiboi chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
That's so beautiful... So sweet- makes me feel like crying. Lovely message, too.
| Darkstar chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
I like the personification.
| Goldensong chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Cool! I'm not usually into rhyming poetry at all, but this was really good! Thanks for posting it, I like to read this stuff.
| that ed kidd chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
This a very beautiful poem. ] I enjoyed reading it. Lovely work.
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
Very sad. But I love it.
| Eternal Twilight chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Awwh; that was beautiful! *-* I nearly teared up. ;;-;; You have a beautiful way with words; and I wish to read more of your works. . Keep it up, sweetie...you've certantly got a spark. .
PS: Malaysian Idol? Is that like American Idol? . It caught my curiousity. .
| Shade chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
that was incredible. The story you told through rhyme hit me hard because earlier this year my grandfather past away and I just went to his memorial. Your writing is some of the best i've seen on the site.
| spazticpoetgrl chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
nicely done, and with some big words too! *is a bit dense* hey its summer... i wish i had someone to write me back like jack did. youre so talented yo. keep writin -Spaz
| Drowning Rooster chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
aw. that's sweet.
| Velvet Valentine chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
This is a very touching piece of work. It actually brought tears to my eyes. Very good, and I'm sorry to hear about the recent death. My heart goes out to you.
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Quite a story, the rhythm also played nicely along with your rhyme scheme. It has a spiritual quality.