man, i love this story even more everytime i read it!

that was AWESOME. I was frightend that it was going to go anst-attack and have Tereth reject Kiyoke once he realized the truth - and even if he didn't kill him, the rejection would have been AWFUL.

Which is why I am so happy that they ended up together. And I'm also kind of glad that they left the town; The idea of them off adventuring together is heartening.

Kudos for a tale well written _

this was awesome! i really loved it!

: )

DH

Hmm, interesting. I don't read much yaoi, but I liked this one.

I like this. it's nicely written, the plots interesting, and I like the characters. Very good!