Nicely done. Great work. :)

This is a very cool poem! It's well written and every word rings clear and true in my head. The imagery is beautiful. I can't critcize this one at all! It kinda reminds me a tad of the style of my latest poem, Ballad, but in a immensely different, better form. You're really good. :D

Wow, amazing! This has a sort of primal, ancient tone, reminds me of something aboriginal or Native American. I'd love to hear this set to music!

-Linnet

This is very well written. I love your choice of words.

... I never noticed this. Sorry 'bout that...

Anyway, this is brilliant, as ever, lol. For some reason, I feel like this is an ancient prophecy - it just reads off like that for me. Very intriguing _ Great work.

wonderful poem. well written, nice rhyming and rhythm, your words flow nicely together. nice use of capitalization and personification. i like this. great job!
btw, sorry i took so long to get to read your work. i was away in new york before. thanks for all your reviews!

Ooh, this is amazing. Reminds me of Tolkien's works-very vivid and beautifully written. Excellent job.

I had to read this three times and i'm still not toatlly sure I got all of what this poem had to offer.
*Shrug* I liked it anyway.

YAHAY! Another Hershey poem! w00t!
(Like your poems, Hershey.)
Okeetay. This is pretty good, albeit rather short. But I like the way that it rhymes well even though all the lines are long. And I really like, as in all your poems, the emotions that this evokes. Cool stuff. Keep it up. I'll keep checkin' on you.
_Ahrar

WOW. It is hard amongst all these tons of poems to find a poem of such caliber. I congratulate you on a wonderful poem. Awesome job.