Reviews for Soul Sakura, Volume I: Destiny Unveiled
Misha Rose chapter 2 . 6/7/2006
Omg, I TOTALLY love this story, even though I've only read two chapters. It's really, really good and I can't wait to read the rest! This is so going on my favorite's list.
Safako chapter 38 . 2/14/2006
I really liked your story and I really liked the idea of how you had the greek god Pandora possessing another. I just want to say that this story was beautifully crafted and I'm going to read the sequal right away. Thank you for a great story.
Oraculum chapter 36 . 11/7/2005
I love it, I love it. 3
gurpi chapter 12 . 10/8/2005
Beauty and briallance...I could not keep the eyes of the screen. The description is amazing I felt as though I was in japan!...
Ms.Julia chapter 36 . 9/11/2005
awsome update :) please do it again soon kay? i cant wait!
sexydragon chapter 32 . 8/1/2005
hey i really like your story. its awesome but you havent wrotten another chapter since weel right another one i am at a huge cliffhanger. you can read my story if you want to? sexydragon
Brittany chapter 34 . 5/17/2005
Cat as always when I wish for something interesting to read you deliver! I am truly your devoted and avid reader Cat! PLease keep the story up or I shall die a horrible death. (not literally) Love you Cat!
Ms.Julia chapter 32 . 5/9/2005
your story is simply divine, please do hurry and continue! _ its great! AWSOME FANTASTIC! MUI BUENA! ..ect... lol please hurry and post!
Soccer Dude chapter 31 . 3/1/2005
Checking in again after a batch of chapters. I should probably wait until this arc is over, but as long as the material is still fresh in my mind...

Very good work, though it seems really pessemistic and generally negative about human nature. There are mean-spirited people, but just as many nice ones too. I like how you portrayed Sakura as one of those former class queens who's reformed her ways. Nothing quite as unsettling as asking yourself "Was I like that?" The whole plotline with Asami is an oft-used device, but the connections made and how it came to be were well done. I'm looking forward to the confrontation.

Grammar remains mostly clean, though there's a few missing spaces between sentences. I also thought I should mention some of your descriptions seem rather mechanical. A few personifications would add a bit more life. Other than that, this story continues to be a solid, enjoyable read.
Ephemeral Seraphim chapter 2 . 2/19/2005
I read your bio, and I found that you've got published _ Congratulations. I'll be sure to look for that book as soon as I can, but I just came from the book store and bought about fifty books :( Maybe next time when I come up, I'll buy it...

Anyway, great wording, great stuff, and of course, wonderful, wonderful prose that never fails to enchant the reader. Sakura's characterization is wonderfully done, and being a happy, bubbly character in the being probably indicates that this is going to all change pretty soon. Oh, the pairing with Sakura and Yukio is extremely CUTE. I also liked the scene with Sakura's mother and father kissing, and Sakura's reaction to it. Actually, I think that was the best part of it, because Sakura is so well developed through her dialogue and actions that she has a mind of her own _ You definitely know your craft, and I envy your writing skills, especially since you create such flawless writing, and it's the way that you make it seem so easy that really makes it have this beautiful touch to it. As for the overall scene, it was beautiful, touching, and mostly innocent. Anyway, great job on this chapter, and good luck on the book sales.

Signed,your fangirl,chibichocobo
Ephemeral Seraphim chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
I decided that I would review this again, chapter by chapter, because I believe, without a doubt, that this is one of your best works. And believe me, this was very difficult for me to say, because there are so many wonderful works out there I absolutely adore and treasure. You're one of my role models of writers, and I think that your writing prose is elegant, beautiful, sophisticated in its telling, and of course, it contains the perfect elements of a good story. The reincarnation is a wonderful concept, and the overall story has that Ceres feel (this is a compliment. Even though it feels similar to Ceres: Celestial Legend, you manage to make it fresh and unique, an idea that is completely your own) I love the way that you portray you characters in the beginning, and the voice of an omnipresent being is also wonderful. But another thing to add is that this FEELS like an authentic manga should. There is something about this story that holds that charimsatic charm of a manga with serious storytelling, well-portrayed characters that we can all care about, some well-placed moments of humor, but most of all, that prolonging sense of wanting to read more of a fabulous story about someone who can relate with all of us, because she is so real, life-like, and three-dimensional. The one thing about manga that contrasts with comic books is that the heroes are more relatable, mainly because they're just like their readers. You've managed to create this perfectly, and I can't tell you how magnificent of a writer you truly are. I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed you in a long while, and I would like to thank you for your reviews on my works, putting me on your favorites list, but most importantly, being a fan of my works. Knowing that somebody as talented as yourself would find interest in my works is very encouraging, and I can only hope that I can reach your calibur of writing style. Your ideas are fresh and original, and incorporating a Greek mythology into the story is very refreshing. You put an interesting twist on a very old story that has survived through many generations. If you were to get this story published, you would have editors drooling for your works _ Nothing in my eloquence can describe how this fic truly amounts up to my expectations, and everything is sublime, perfect, regal. A fic worthy of the reviews that it holds, and a wonderful read, at that. If anybody else bothered to read this review, which is very lengthy, I have to tell you people that this fic is a true masterpiece. Anybody else who thinks otherwise is either deluded or has no sense of taste. I recommend Shamara Ambrose to anybody who likes a story with that 'manga-ish' feel that we all love and crave. If you're looking for something like that, then Soul Sakura is for you. Anyway, Shamara, wonderful job, and I can't wait to see more of this in the future (although I have some catching up to do in this story, which I certainly don't mind _) Again, congratulations on writing this story, and thank you for providing me with a wholesome story to read.

Signed,your fangirl,chibichocobo
Iamet chapter 30 . 1/24/2005
Fireness o_O Reminds me of Yuki :3 Anyways. Continue writing! :D!
Iamet chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
-demonic- Write more...! -angelic- teehee - Keep on writing! I wanna see if Ryu and Sakura end up together! -giggles-
Ms.Julia chapter 29 . 12/24/2004
omg i love this chapter _
Aharah Musici chapter 28 . 12/12/2004
I can never log in, but anyways, You are one of the best authors I have read on fictionpress.

Your only major flaw is that you seem to go from in the hall to in the berdroom with out telling us how they got there.

Also, you have aggravated my PET peeve. You said that the plural of manga and anime is anime~s~ and manga~s~ *shudders*

Because the japaneese don't have a plural form it is manga in both the singular and plural. Other than that you are exelent. If you can just fix that you have an exelent story on your hands and I will recigonize you as a true otaku. I have been one fince 1993 _V.
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