Reviews for What Causes You to Cry?
punktunit chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
ok ok here it is now cuz ur a loser so be happy now. haha its funny. im a phyco.
Had a nightmare again last night.
Falling through the time of darkness,
everyday monsters come out to play
mind games in my head.
I'm strapped to my bed.
I can't get up, cant wake up.
I set the fire, it was me,
and I would do it again.
That's what I tell the man,
can't hold me down.
There is no reality.
The man told me reality is your imagination
running wild in a wide open field.
Can I get an AMEN!
Wake up, I'm screaming now.
I forgot how to breath, I'm suffocating.
Am I dead yet?
No, it's just a dream.
That's when I woke up yo find myself in a padded room,
strapped to my bed.
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
this is something that makes no sense... in a logical fashion. it is very creative and interesting with the words and lines chosen.