|Reviews for Red|
| Aidrianna chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
oh that is Nice. i like that. i did the whole love/jealousy/obsession thing. in stories...and poems...and real life... so i know how that feels...lovely poem however... i think i shall save it in my favorites...
| SleepDontWeep chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
jesus thats creepy and evil!
i mean its amazingly written and all and so clever but its still so evil!
I LOVE IT!"!
anyways i hope u continue to write disturbingly beautiful poetry such as this!
much love and admiratio Gretchen45 x
o and please o please review my story: truly madly deeply.(and it doesnt have 50 chapters or 100,0 words!) bye love ya xx
| Escape Velocity chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
Of your three colour poems, I think this one is the most powerful. Te vocabulary used is really perfect: the implications of innocence in 'rosy' combined with the murderous anger and love the narrator expresses is an especially interesting juxtaposition. The repetition of verses is also good, as it offers readers different perspectives on what the narrator sees and feels while seeing.