Reviews for Green
hey maria chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Eh. To be honest, everything in here was kind of...expected. When people think of green, the first things that come to mind are envy, grass, money, etc. This poem was well-written and all, but it would have been better if you focused on green in a more original way. But I do think that the third stanza, about the reflection of light pigments and all, was pretty interesting. Never thought of it that way before.
rap-sucks chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
great insight. almost paradoxical at times- naivety seems to go hand in hand with innocence and trust, yet envy and greed, although natural feelings, are cold and calculating. very interesting. sorry if this review is kinda rambling but i've been awake for way too long
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
wonderful interpretations on the meaning on the colour, but what about relaxation... or hm, is it already there? (probably is) nice job 0)