|Reviews for When Sleeping Pills Fail|
| Deleted Account 525 chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
Loving the short sentances, creates the mood. The odd rhyme too, always good to throw in. The end paragraph feels like it breaks the speed of the piece though. Oh yeh, the repetition is nice too, very insomniac like.
| shea's surrender chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
excellent. really. You did a good job capturing the thoughts that bother people in the middle of the night, and how downright weird they can get. pointless, too. Anyway, really good.