Reviews for Why Don't You Smile?
Emz and Jemz chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
It reminds me of lyrics that pertain to ska music.

Interesting words chosen for events, stuff like that. :
Ria Mala chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
I like how you describe everything...I can picture it.
grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
Strong poem. Reads a bit like an advertisement or a billboard in some places, which just adds to the imagery of a selfish life in the fast lane.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
I like the edge to your writing!