Reviews for The Chosen
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 30 . 3/11/2012
WHAT? NO SEQUEL! Noooooooooooooooo. This was a very gripping story. Not the cliched end of the world story I had expected. It was fun to read and very well written! I finished in a day! Great job!
Aliandriana chapter 30 . 12/17/2011
it was AMAZING. kind of sad it ended
Lilac chapter 30 . 5/5/2011
That was possibly the best original story I've ever read. It was creative, well thought out and although it wasn't entirely romance, it had enough balance to keep everyone happy. I'm sure that if you wanted to, you could get this published. It was that good. And the fact that you just let it end, unlike some other authors, shows that you have some self control. You don't keep the story going for years and years until you've got 100 chapters and everyone who ever like your story is sick of it and sending you hate mail. Good job.
far chapter 30 . 10/18/2010
I. Loved. This. So. Flipping (love that word!). Much.

*eep*

There were funny bits, there were a whole lotta sad bits (why did Lydia have to die... *wail*) and the rest was just "Flipping" awesome :D

I would have loved a sequel, but since you don't want to *hint hint!* I can't... *nudge nudge* *wink wink*

Ah well -

off to read your other stories and keep my rep as a stalker!
Aero Faerie Extraordinaire chapter 30 . 8/24/2010
I thought this would forever be one of those brilliant stories that remain unfinished. I'm so happy I stumbled over it and saw you'd updated it. I'm so happy you finished it - I loved it. Well done, it was fab x
XxBlInDaRtIsTxX chapter 30 . 7/11/2010
This story was amazing, you are truly a talented author. I would find a publisher and get this published. If I were you ofcourse. Very engaging and well written, congradulations, I give you Kudos. And many, many of them.
jaliwo chapter 30 . 7/10/2010
I liked this story a lot. You really portrayed the action parts well, and I could feel my heart pumping every time the Hunters were near, and their daring rescue plans for Lucien and the Chosen that were being experimented on.

I think it would really be nice if you added an epilogue, maybe a year or two after they've been in the bunker to show how their lives are, and if Loch ever found out Ro cheated on him and how he reacted to it.

Otherwise, great job! And great story!
Serenity Marie chapter 30 . 5/30/2010
I love this story. I can't even explain how much I loved it and how excited I was when you started updating again.

I never expected that you'd ever finish it... but you did! And that is amazing. Thank you!

Your story is better than some published novels I have read before. The story is unique and well written. The characters are believable and lovable and it's refreshing to read a story where the main character isn't going to save the world or have everyone worship her... Echo is just a girl trying to survive, finding love and struggling with her friends.

She seems real.

It was a fun run,

Serenity Marie
Serenity Marie chapter 29 . 5/29/2010
It was a great chapter, and I'm happy they finally got the the bunker. I'm not sure what else to say, but I'm excited for the next and final chapter.

One question, how many bunkers are there? Are they able to contact each other? Just curious, but I was thinking about that the other day.

Anyway, keep writing

Serenity Marie
Serenity Marie chapter 28 . 5/27/2010
I'm happy you didn't kill Ro, that would make me sad! And everyone else. Two more chapters? Oh my! I'm excited.

Doc is lucky at least. It seems like they would need some good doctors... and we like him now! Since he saved Ro and all :)

Good chapter, again! Keep writing!
Serenity Marie chapter 27 . 5/27/2010
I really like Loch :)

And I'm happy Lys and Echo are patching their relationship up. And poor Ro, I hope she'll be okay.

I'm excited that the book is coming close to an end... but I want to keep reading more.. Oh my!

Good chapter
Kura-sama chapter 27 . 5/24/2010
Good chapter! Love how they got away from the lab the perspective change to some random negociator guy was great, really adds to the story.

Loving it more and more!
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Serenity Marie chapter 26 . 5/21/2010
Oh no, poor Ro. She is going to be alright... right? RIGHT?

Wahh, it would be horrible to lose her right after they get Loch back... Guh.

Echo was amazing. I hope she doesn't have too big of a break down when the calm comes... or maybe I do, since then Lys would need to comfort her...

Heh

Anyway, it was a good chapter and I'm still ecstatic that you are updating regularly again and the story is progressing in a believable and entertaining way.

There was one itty bitty typo I saw:

“Lys was freaking out. Lock was freaking out.” I think you meant Loch not Lock. :)

And I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter D
toxic-noodle725 chapter 25 . 5/20/2010
holy shit ur back. i had read ur stories YEARS ago but never forgot about it. always wondering if ud ever finish it. haha looks like it. lovin it. update!
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