Reviews for The Chosen |
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![]() ![]() Huzzah! for continuous and recent updates in both this and The Attic. Score, you! Keep it up. Guess Remus' estimation about Ro wasn't too far off the mark. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh god... this muz hv been the most interesting story i've ever read so far here..hehe..hope tt dun get in your head... it's real wonderful... do post asap... can't wait for more... hehe |
![]() ![]() Another great chapter. No, Sparkling Eyes, he's not African American, he's just American. Anyway, it seemed to go by rather quickly (the chapter), but it still was good, and moved the plot along. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() Another great chapter. No, Sparkling Eyes, he's not African American, he's just American. Anyway, it seemed to go by rather quickly (the chapter), but it still was good, and moved the plot along. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good One. Really intrigued by this idea, and it seems so plausible too. Loving it. Waiting for updates .~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() reALLYY? damn! and loch is lys's bro right? i think... anyways, bad lys! bad perverted lys! fofls, anyways, i meant more action, when they are AWAKE. _, o well, beggars cant be choosers! great chappie! update soon! |
![]() ![]() O. Ro was in lOve. Ha ha. I loved the part when Lys touched Echo...in a very private area and she shoved him away. That was classic. And I didn't know Lys was African American. I thought he was caucasion! So he's Af. Am. then? Cuz I'm really confused now. Bold and Shy are asian or something. Ro, Athena, MAddox, Remus, Irvine, and Echo are all caucasion. And Lys is African American? I'm so confused now...gr. But this story is so good! I love it! update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa, echo's slow. what's she good at again? update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Cliffhanger! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I pop by and to my surprise, you have 2 new chapters up for me to read. Yay _ Ahem, anyways, nice dramatic effects going _ You even had me worried for a second XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() wouldn't you think that they'd know where 2 build the shelter? i wonder if there's a "team" comprised only of "shelter builders" |
![]() ![]() WOW! Amazing story, the best one I've read online yet. Are you going to get this published? Please keep posting, I'd love to read more. |
![]() ![]() Gah! This stupid computer! I wrote this long review and it didn't work when I clicked "Submit Review." Damnett! OK. I'm done. No wait. DAMNETT LYS! DON'T EVER FREAK ANYONE OUT LIKE THAT AGAIN! OK. Now I'm done. Lol. That was SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER. You had me jumping up and down in anticipation and it was like a movie scene. The walking out of the fire thing. It was SO cool. Now I'm curious as to how he survived that. I mean, normally people just don't walk out of houses that exploded. But hey. Who cares? The story's too good to have me thinking about all this "normal" crap. But anyways, GREAT JOB! I LOVE THIS STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...absolutely amazing |