i like ur stories.. this one's pretty cool.. update soon! ciao

your story is so cool! please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!

this story is so good! How could u leave us with a cliffhanger like that? plz update soon! *adds story to favs list*

Waah evil place to end .

Nu~ need to know what happened!

Will Lys and Echo get together eventually?

Update soon~

how come they didnt get the feeling to flee? and, why did remus stay begind? and , why did it take u so long to update!/lol

:O (LE GASP)

Nice chapter! You did really well, and that ending...you're rather good at cliffhangers, you know. (this is the point where people normally say update soon, but pressure isn't any fun, so I won't :) )

WHAT? So NO EXP REQ., and he needs a resume. Btw, who needs a resume to work at a CD store? (this is my reevenge [funny song] for not updating.)

Great chapter! LOL...I loved the part where Lys told that man that Echo and he had a baby. Poor Echo...that would be so embarrassing!

Wo! New chapter! I actually can't read it right now so I'm gonna print it out but I can't wait to see what's gonna happen!

Wow...this is really well thought-out, and very interesting. I can completely see this happening...the writing is amazing! Echo's thoughts and feelings are described in really vivid detail, and so is what the Chosen are going through. I feel really sorry for Lucien, though...his own dad? That's so cruel! Anyway, I hope you update soon...I can't wait to find out what happens!

Read the 12 chapters again, just because it's that good. When's the next update coming?

:O conflict! Sorry for taking so long nn; I really loved this... Lys and Echo are so cute X3

I just thought I'd drop a line to say that I really like where the story's going and am looking forward to more of it! I'd normally stick in a critique in here, but I didn't find anything really to mention. Keep up the good work!

Hello again! I MUST say that I've fallen completely for your two stories but I HAVE to get a grip - otherwise I'll end up reading the others stories you have put up which also seem to catch my eye.
Firstly, let me congratulate you on the originality of the titles ( I don't know why but I've kinda grown into them while I read the two stories, this and The Attic) and the originality you seem to own with your ideas for the plots. Without having to read your other stories; I can tell you don't write what most people in FP do... like boy meets girl and all that kind of stuff... which I really appreciate since it makes fun to go into this web page and find such a different type of story!
I love this... ALL of it. The ideas; the reality, the characters, the action... everything seems to take place and it's very proper for your style of writing. I wish I had more than praise to give you but sadly I don't!*wow, that's a first:P!* Well; since I don't want to keep babbling on and on about how great I think this story is and how fun it's for me and easy to slip into... I'll just mention that at the ending of this story I kind of got inspired and started to write one myself. WARNING: I'm not one of those people who steal ideas... I just got an idea which is NOTHING like this story! (I won't steal anything from here, so don't worry ;))
Hehe... thanks for that! I was wanting to find something interesting and refreshing to write... and I just found the "impulse" through this piece of work! n_n