Reviews for Blind
Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
WOW! OMG OMG MIA! JUST WOW! I LOVE THIS! *faints*
Kim
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
this was cool. i must admit i got a bit lost in the middle so im not completely sure what the poem was about. someone leaving this guy cause he doesnt pay attention to them anymore? i dunno, feeling slightly sick and tired now. there was a segment in htere i really loved...
"It's funny how you don't see him at all
Just as you watched me but never saw me fall." very nice.
kudos chica, im really starting to see a consistent style and im loving it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
that last line is so true... youre awesome at ending poems... nicely done and cool rhyming... another poem with a powerfuyl message
Karma Fish chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
Angsty and unnerving and wonderful. Keep writing.